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How to Write a Funding Request Letter That Gets a "Yes"
Write a funding request letter that gets a 'yes' using this 3-part framework.
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Three Key Elements for a Better Funding Request Letter
Too often, these letters are either dense, text-heavy documents that fail to connect, or passionate pleas that lack the hard evidence needed to be taken seriously. This framework will show you how to strike a balance to create a funding request letter that not only gets read but gets funded.
Key Takeaways
- Start with a Human Story: Don't lead with dry data. Open your letter with a short, vivid story that illustrates the problem you solve on a human level. This creates an immediate emotional connection.
- Show, Don't Tell, with Adoption Metrics: Back up your story with hard evidence. Share 2-3 key stats that show real people are already using or benefiting from your work. Growth and momentum are what de-risk the investment for a funder.
- Make a Concrete Request: Clearly state how much money you need, provide a detailed plan for how you will spend it, and explain the provable impact that money will have. Vagueness is the enemy of funding.
1) Human Story
- What It Is: The Story is the "why" behind your work, told through the lens of a single, relatable human experience. It’s a short, vivid narrative that illustrates the urgency and unmet nature of the need you address, your unique approach, and the change you create.
- Why It's Critical: Funders are people, and people connect with stories. A powerful story makes the problem feel urgent and your solution feel essential. It grabs the reader's attention and makes them emotionally invested from the first sentence.
High-level Examples (Productive vs. Less Productive)
✅ Productive Example | ❌ Less Productive Example |
Our mission began with Sarah, a recent graduate with a disability. She was brilliant and qualified, but after a mountain of 50 rejections, all she felt was invisible. She told us her talent was trapped behind a digital wall, automatically screened out by inaccessible hiring software before anyone ever saw her potential. That’s why we built our community. In her first month of her involvement, Sarah didn’t just get three interviews; she told us that for the first time she started applying for jobs, she finally felt seen. | We are a non-profit organization focused on improving employment outcomes for people with disabilities by addressing inaccessible hiring technologies. |
2) Growth Trends
- What It Is: Growth in both adoption and impact shows funders your solution isn’t a one-off. It’s working and people want it. Adoption is the proof that your unique approach has promise, with concrete data showing your solution has momentum where others may stall.
- Why It's Critical: A story creates an emotional connection, but adoption builds logical trust. For a funder, this is the most important way you de-risk their investment. It shows them you aren't just guessing; you've built something that has traction and potential.
High-level Examples (Productive vs. Less Productive)
✅ Productive Example | ❌ Less Productive Example |
In the past year, our community doubled in size to over 1,000 active members, with 50% now paying for premium services. This growth is fueling our north star, as our members have already seen a 40% increase in interview requests since joining. | We are confident that our program will be very popular among our target audience and expect to see significant growth in the coming year. |
3) Concrete request
- What It Is: The Request is a clear, detailed, evidence-backed ask. It names the exact funding needed, outlines a high-level plan for using it, shows concrete evidence proving why your audience needs these items now, and explains why the plan is both feasible and likely to deliver a higher return on investment than other options.
- Why It's Critical: This is where you demonstrate that you are a competent and trustworthy operator. A concrete request builds confidence, but anticipating and addressing a funder's skepticism about your strategy is what shows you are a true expert. It proves you’ve considered all the angles and makes it easy for them to say "yes.”
High-level Examples (Productive vs. Less Productive)
✅ Productive Example | ❌ Less Productive Example |
We are seeking $250,000 to hire two community managers and an outreach coordinator. This team will allow us to double our membership and increase job placements by 40% over 18 months. Based on overwhelming demand for our core product (our waitlist for our membership program has grown 200% this year) we know this expansion is urgently needed. We've chosen this community-led strategy over paid advertising, as our pilot program proved it has a 3x higher ROI for member success. | We are requesting $250,000 to support our staffing and general operating costs so we can continue our important work. |
When a Formal Funding Request Letter Isn't the Right Move
While this framework is powerful, it's not for every situation. A formal funding request letter might be overkill if you are in the extremely early "idea" phase with zero proof of adoption, or for a very casual follow-up with a long-time donor. This structure is a first step for when you are ready to make a serious, evidence-backed ask.
Frequently Asked Questions About Your Funding Request Letter
How do you start a funding request letter?
Start with a short, compelling human story that illustrates the problem you solve. Avoid starting with your organization's history or a dry mission statement. Grab their attention and make them care about the "why" before you explain the "what."
What should be included in a funding request?
Every funding request should have three core elements: a compelling Story that creates an emotional connection, proof of Adoption that shows traction and momentum, and a concrete Request that details the amount, the plan, and the provable impact.
How do you end a letter asking for money?
End with your concrete request and a clear call to action. After you've stated the amount and the impact it will have, end with a simple, direct next step, such as: "I would welcome the opportunity to discuss this with you further next week."
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